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Showing posts with label Bobby's Biggest Bubble. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Bobby's Biggest Bubble. Show all posts
Friday, February 27, 2015
Illustration Friday: Metropolis
Illustration Friday: Every Friday a word is given on the website, IllustrationFriday.com. Artists and illustrators then submit an image that represents that word all during the week. Tossing this in this late submission in the final hours for Illustration Friday's word of the week: Metropolis.
Saturday, January 24, 2015
Flip side: Otter sketches
In the last post, I showed an old Christmas card sketch in blue line pencil. Funny thing is, on the other side of that paper there are several sketches of my supporting character, Otter, from my book, Bobby's Biggest Bubble. You can actually see the pencil indentations of Otter in the paper.
These sketches weren't the first of Otter. These are closer to the actual final version of the character seen in the book. Originally, Otter was to be the antagonist. But over the years, it became more important for Otter to be the supporting friend during Bobby's adventure.
Several character sketches fleshing out the character, Otter, from Bobby's Biggest Bubble |
These sketches weren't the first of Otter. These are closer to the actual final version of the character seen in the book. Originally, Otter was to be the antagonist. But over the years, it became more important for Otter to be the supporting friend during Bobby's adventure.
Thursday, May 15, 2014
Illustration Friday: Voyage (Bobby's Biggest Bubble Sketch)
Illustration Friday: Every Friday a word is given on the website, IllustrationFriday.com. Artists and illustrators then submit an image that represents that word all during the week.
This week's word: VOYAGE
Inked and gray marker comp version of a Bobby's Biggest Bubble Kickstarter sketch
Thought Process: Not much thought behind this one. I had already had this image pencil sketched for one of my KickStarter backers for helping me get my children's book published. In all, I had to make about a dozen different full pages sketches of the four main characters from Bobby's Biggest Bubble.
This week's word: VOYAGE
Thought Process: Not much thought behind this one. I had already had this image pencil sketched for one of my KickStarter backers for helping me get my children's book published. In all, I had to make about a dozen different full pages sketches of the four main characters from Bobby's Biggest Bubble.
Inked and gray marker comp version of a Bobby's Biggest Bubble Kickstarter sketch |
Pencil sketch of the four main characters from Bobby's Biggest Bubble
This is very close, but a rougher version to the original Kickstarter reward pencil sketch
This turned out to be my favorite of the group and I've been thinking of doing this image as a promotional poster for the next two sequel books.
This is very close, but a rougher version to the original Kickstarter reward pencil sketch
Another version of the sketch, playing with different subtle changes with textures and details |
Sunday, February 23, 2014
Illustration Friday: SPACE
Illustration Friday: Every Friday a word is given on the website, IllustrationFriday.com. Artists and illustrators then submit an image that represents that word all during the week.
This week's word: SPACE
SPOILER ALERT: The big climatic ending to my first children's book: Bobby's Biggest Bubble
Thought Process:
A no-brainer this week.
Space makes me think of the space scene I drew for the climatic ending of my first children's book: Bobby's Biggest Bubble. Of all the terrific comments and kind emails I have received about the book -- this 2-page spread was usually the fan favorite, especially for boys.
I like to think it's the coloring that made this page "pop" . . .
Knowing the amount of pink bubblegum coloring the pages would have, I boosted the night sky's blues and even made the meteor a brighter blue to counter the pink; balancing the warm coloring on the left with the cool coloring on the right.
This page was the greatest challenge I had when making the book. It was the part of the story I worried about the most. Even though this 2-page spread was near the end of the book, other then the cover, it was the first page I completed with full color.
Once I had this part of the story behind me, the rest of the book fell into place.
You can see more about this comic strip at this link here and more recently here.
This week's word: SPACE
SPOILER ALERT: The big climatic ending to my first children's book: Bobby's Biggest Bubble |
Thought Process:
A no-brainer this week.
Space makes me think of the space scene I drew for the climatic ending of my first children's book: Bobby's Biggest Bubble. Of all the terrific comments and kind emails I have received about the book -- this 2-page spread was usually the fan favorite, especially for boys.
I like to think it's the coloring that made this page "pop" . . .
Knowing the amount of pink bubblegum coloring the pages would have, I boosted the night sky's blues and even made the meteor a brighter blue to counter the pink; balancing the warm coloring on the left with the cool coloring on the right.
This page was the greatest challenge I had when making the book. It was the part of the story I worried about the most. Even though this 2-page spread was near the end of the book, other then the cover, it was the first page I completed with full color.
Once I had this part of the story behind me, the rest of the book fell into place.
You can see more about this comic strip at this link here and more recently here.
Space makes me think of the space scene I drew for the climatic ending of my first children's book: Bobby's Biggest Bubble. Of all the terrific comments and kind emails I have received about the book -- this 2-page spread was usually the fan favorite, especially for boys.
I like to think it's the coloring that made this page "pop" . . .
Knowing the amount of pink bubblegum coloring the pages would have, I boosted the night sky's blues and even made the meteor a brighter blue to counter the pink; balancing the warm coloring on the left with the cool coloring on the right.
This page was the greatest challenge I had when making the book. It was the part of the story I worried about the most. Even though this 2-page spread was near the end of the book, other then the cover, it was the first page I completed with full color.
Once I had this part of the story behind me, the rest of the book fell into place.
You can see more about this comic strip at this link here and more recently here.
Tuesday, August 6, 2013
Library Book Reading: South River Public Library
Getting ready for the reading at South River Library.
Attached is the promotional flyer. Please help spread the word . . .
South River Public Library is located:
55 Appleby Avenue
South River, NJ 08882
Contact: Dawn Bladzinski 732-254-2488 registration@southriverlibrary.org
Tuesday, July 23, 2013
The sequel: Bobby's Ginormous Jelly
Already getting a little overwhelmed that its already past mid-summer and I need to get the sequel finished in the next few weeks. I'll have a few days of vacation to focus on getting the work done.
Being to promo the new sequel book due this fall. |
Hope to have it all done in time to have something to show for library book readings like the one in South River, NJ on Aug 12th and especially for the Collingswood Book Festival in NJ this Oct. 5th.
I'll be sure to post more info here as thing move along.
I'll be sure to post more info here as thing move along.
Saturday, June 15, 2013
Drawing Process: Bobby's Biggest Bubble
I've recently had quite a few people asking about how I did the artwork for my children's book Bobby's Biggest Bubble. I'll try to explain my process below:
I used a great small (and inexpensive) program called ArtRage Pro to do my line work and coloring. My story was very whimsical and funny, so I wanted the book to have a Saturday morning cartoon style, using solid black outlines and vibrant flat "cel"-like coloring.
I found ArtRage Pro was the best program for the line control I needed. (Other more popular programs, like Photoshop and Painter, just didn't have that feel or line control I wanted.) Using the program's default "Round and Smooth" ink pen setting and adjusting it's Smoothing setting to about 40-50% gave me just enough control while keeping the line smooth and clean.
The image was first pencil sketched, scanned and then placed into ArtRage where I traced in the ink lines (using about 9% pen size).
Each element (e.g. kitchen background, the bubble) and character were drawn on separate layers, allowing composition/size adjustments.
For coloring, I used the Watercolor setting of Wet on Dry to get the solid color fills.
I created separate layers for highlights and shades and placed their layers over the color layers. Then I drew in the highlights and shadows using the same smooth Ink Pen as before, only at a much larger size (about 15%). For shading, the layer's Opacity was turned down to 15-20% using black as the color. For highlights, the layer's Opacity was turned down to about 60% using white as the color.
Lowering the opacity creates a transparent coloring control that allows me to darken or lighten the colors underneath.
When the image was finished, it was exported to a Photoshop PSD file (with layers) so that I could compile and convert all images (and layers) into a high quality TIF files and place them into Adobe's InDesign for publishing. Final touches like text, word balloons and outline frames were done in Photoshop.
FYI: I plan to use ArtRage again for the book's sequel . . . love using this program!
I used a great small (and inexpensive) program called ArtRage Pro to do my line work and coloring. My story was very whimsical and funny, so I wanted the book to have a Saturday morning cartoon style, using solid black outlines and vibrant flat "cel"-like coloring.
The finalized kitchen scene from a page of Bobby's Biggest Bubble (sans type/lettering) |
The image was first pencil sketched, scanned and then placed into ArtRage where I traced in the ink lines (using about 9% pen size).
The original pencil sketch scanned into ArtRage Pro to be inked and colored |
For coloring, I used the Watercolor setting of Wet on Dry to get the solid color fills.
I created separate layers for highlights and shades and placed their layers over the color layers. Then I drew in the highlights and shadows using the same smooth Ink Pen as before, only at a much larger size (about 15%). For shading, the layer's Opacity was turned down to 15-20% using black as the color. For highlights, the layer's Opacity was turned down to about 60% using white as the color.
Lowering the opacity creates a transparent coloring control that allows me to darken or lighten the colors underneath.
The image shown w/o highlights/shading, but includes the word balloon and outer framing (via Photoshop) |
When the image was finished, it was exported to a Photoshop PSD file (with layers) so that I could compile and convert all images (and layers) into a high quality TIF files and place them into Adobe's InDesign for publishing. Final touches like text, word balloons and outline frames were done in Photoshop.
FYI: I plan to use ArtRage again for the book's sequel . . . love using this program!
Wednesday, March 27, 2013
Images from da Ol' Creaky Hard Drive: Bobby
Digital watercolor base with color pencil lines (Painter 12) |
What's strange is finding images on the drive that I don't remember making . . . ( I do find this happening more often as I get older.) I'm pretty sure I did these images . . .
yea . . . pretty sure . . .
This image is one of those test sketches I was doing last year when I was making my children's book. I do remember making quite a few test sketches, trying different styles and looks -- but time was the key back then. To do the entire book in a more painterly style would have easily added another month to the workload.
I really wanted a sketchier style to the book, but I was concerned on how to control the pencil line details. Transferring pencil lines to print is tricky and risky; it's very easy to lose many pencil strokes when scanning into a computer. Since this was to be my first major self published book . . . I wanted no risks taken. The final decision was to go with heavy ink lines and spot coloring, making it a very cartoony-looking style.
Thursday, March 21, 2013
Publisher's Weekly Review! (Updated)
Just found out today that my first children's book, Bobby's Biggest Bubble, was selected and reviewed by Publisher's Weekly and printed in their bi-monthly magazine for independent publishers called PW Select. Too exciting!
Update:
Cover to the PW Select Feb 2013 Magazine |
Above: clipping of the book review from PW Select magazine |
Adding direct link to the review on PW's website:
Thursday, January 24, 2013
Bobby's Biggest Bubble: The Doggie Story
Those who have read my first children's book, Bobby's Biggest Bubble, should already know that I put a little secondary story inside the book. The two dogs in the book, Woger and Oggy are having their own little adventure as Bobby's story is told. Woger is the bigger dog whose constantly watching his mischievous little pal, Oggy.
I knew I wanted supporting characters in the story, but I didn't want a lot of dialogue. So what better then to use two cute dogs following the boys in the adventure. The dogs don't need to talk. Kids love animals. Win, Win.
Then it occurred to me, these dogs could have their own tiny adventure in the background.
It was surprising to find that many children saw this secondary story immediately. I thought it might be something they would find on the 3rd or 4th reading. But many parents tell me that their children loved seeing Oggy floating in the background. Children like to search for Oggy before the page is read to them.
Roger and Oggy will return along with Bobby and Otter in the book's sequel: Bobby's Ginormous Jelly set for release by Fall 2013.
Seen here is Bobby's dog Woger (left) and Otter's dog, Oggy (right) having their own little adventure. |
I knew I wanted supporting characters in the story, but I didn't want a lot of dialogue. So what better then to use two cute dogs following the boys in the adventure. The dogs don't need to talk. Kids love animals. Win, Win.
Then it occurred to me, these dogs could have their own tiny adventure in the background.
As Bobby's is creating his biggest bubblegum bubble -- Oggy starts chewing on a few spare gumballs and creates his own bubble. The major difference? Little Oggy starts to float away with his bubble.
Woger, the ever faithful pup, is always seen watching Oggy as he floats away higher and higher. But by the story's ending, something happens and it all comes around full circle. Oggy is seen safely back down on earth, (though stuck up in a tree.)
Woger, the ever faithful pup, is always seen watching Oggy as he floats away higher and higher. But by the story's ending, something happens and it all comes around full circle. Oggy is seen safely back down on earth, (though stuck up in a tree.)
Roger and Oggy will return along with Bobby and Otter in the book's sequel: Bobby's Ginormous Jelly set for release by Fall 2013.
Tuesday, January 22, 2013
The Importance of the Re-Write!: Intro
RE: Bobby's Biggest Bubble and its Re-Writes
Before finally printing my first book last year, I gathered all the past information and images I could find. Some things were lost due to a broken hard drive or merely misplacing a file or two. But most of the material was archived on several backup drives.
Since the book's first version was made nearly 19 years ago, the story itself has gone through quite a few major revisions over the years. I found one of the original dummy books that I tried to get published nearly a decade ago (this, in particular, was made during my second attempt of breaking into the publishing business.) All of the following images for this posting will be from this black & white mock-up book.
Just to Note: It's safe to say that I HATE seeing my old work. I see so many poor decisions in the storytelling from looking at these old alternative versions of Bobby's Biggest Bubble. The main elements are all there: the gumballs, the big bubble, the meteor and of course Bobby. But much of the story's flow and structure has been tweaked.
Before finally printing my first book last year, I gathered all the past information and images I could find. Some things were lost due to a broken hard drive or merely misplacing a file or two. But most of the material was archived on several backup drives.
Somethings didn't change that much at all. The original cover from the B+W dummy book . |
Since the book's first version was made nearly 19 years ago, the story itself has gone through quite a few major revisions over the years. I found one of the original dummy books that I tried to get published nearly a decade ago (this, in particular, was made during my second attempt of breaking into the publishing business.) All of the following images for this posting will be from this black & white mock-up book.
Just to Note: It's safe to say that I HATE seeing my old work. I see so many poor decisions in the storytelling from looking at these old alternative versions of Bobby's Biggest Bubble. The main elements are all there: the gumballs, the big bubble, the meteor and of course Bobby. But much of the story's flow and structure has been tweaked.
So . . . I'm going to share some of these alternative versions of the book here in 3 parts this week. Think of it as one of those DVD extras where the clips that were edited out.
These postings will assume many have read the story - and if you haven't, there will be spoilers (so don't spoil it for the children!)
Part One will be about the arrival of the gumballs and the neighborhood children.
These postings will assume many have read the story - and if you haven't, there will be spoilers (so don't spoil it for the children!)
Part One will be about the arrival of the gumballs and the neighborhood children.
Part Two will look at Otter and how the bubble was originally going to get around town.
Part Three will show the not so great original rushed ending. (sigh)
You know, I'm starting to think I shouldn't show this stuff. But hopefully, in doing so, others can see how important rewriting a story really is when trying to craft a better story.
The Importance of the Re-Write!: Part 1
Part 1: Delivery and the Town's Children
Image #1: Poor Melman the Mailman struggling to get the package delivered on time. |
Image #2: The neighborhood children guessing what was inside the crate |
Image #3: This page was basically used as seen, except for Wilbie, the town's book smart kid. Wilbie was originally going to be the best friend/sidekick to Bobby, but Otter seemed like a better choice to play a sidekick/fall guy. I still like the idea of the polka dotted gorilla . . . But that would have distracted from what was happening in the image -- which was the opening the crate.
Image #3: The whiz kid, Wilbie, was edited out the book. |
Image #4: I thought by showing Bobby sharing the gumballs with all of the children, it would help establish Bobby as a very likable character. This was a cute page, one I wanted to keep for the book. But eventually, this had to be cut out and replaced by a 2-page spread of the gumballs spilling out of the crate. The 2-page spread does a great job of showing the vast amount of gumballs flowing from the box. . . Far better than if it all happened on a single page.
Image #4: Bobby sharing the goods [ Note: You can see Otter in the distance as an outcast; longing to be a part of the fun - but he stubbornly refuses to be friendly. More about that in Part 2 tomorrow. ] Go to Part Two |
The Importance of the Re-Write!: Part 2
Part 2: Otter and Bubble Transportation
Image # 6: Having Otter become the best friend freed up a lot of explaining. It also allowed me to use Otter's reactions to focus on what was happening on each page. But most important, Bobby needed someone to assist him in moving that giant bubble around. My original writing simply had them head to the hills in the park. No interactions with the townspeople at all (not at all like the book today.)
This part of the story always annoyed me; just running the huge bubblegum bubble to the hills was boring. So I did a fourth re-write -- and then it came to me. I would have Bobby go to several locations, each one stating that Bobby could no longer stay because his bubble was getting too big. (This was the most significant change I made from the original story, and it makes me so happy to see that the alternative idea worked so well.)
Image #7: Now moving the bubble from place to place was crucial to help show the overall size of the bubble and how much it was growing. To help emphasize the massive scale, I would start to have them struggle with controlling and moving the bubble, especially uphill.
Image #8: I knew how I wanted the story to end, but how to get there wasn't easy. In the original story, they make it to the top of the hill -- and then a gust of wind takes it away.
Image #9: This page was left out. It was always the weakest part of the book to me. But it was my only solution at the time. I can safely say that the story has gotten considerably better because of the rewrites. It's important to step back from your work, give it a rest and then approach I again with new eyes.
\(Warning: spoilers abound. I will be revealing how the book ends!)
Tomorrow I will try to cover and explain . . . (shudder) . . . The original ending. Go to Part Three
Image #5: I always knew I wanted a character to sidekick and assist in Bobby's bubble adventure. I thought, "If I had a loner/bully character who joins in on Bobby's adventure, they would become the best of friends." So I originally created Otter as the nosy, spying and pesty kid, (who looks somewhat like Curly from the Three Stooges.)
But I started to find that the story was already getting too wordy. I had Otter always in the backgrounds, occasionally making snide comments and snooping around to see what was happening. The transition of them being strangers and then suddenly best friends was a bit too abrupt. Because of the limited pages, I gave up on having the two eventually become friends -- instead, I just had them as friends from the start. This made it so much easier, and it actually allowed me to add two more pages of the boys' with their crazy gumball activities.
(FYI: Those four pages are my favorite part of the book.)
But I started to find that the story was already getting too wordy. I had Otter always in the backgrounds, occasionally making snide comments and snooping around to see what was happening. The transition of them being strangers and then suddenly best friends was a bit too abrupt. Because of the limited pages, I gave up on having the two eventually become friends -- instead, I just had them as friends from the start. This made it so much easier, and it actually allowed me to add two more pages of the boys' with their crazy gumball activities.
(FYI: Those four pages are my favorite part of the book.)
Image #5: Otter getting closer but still casually strolling by the crate . . . |
Image # 6: Having Otter become the best friend freed up a lot of explaining. It also allowed me to use Otter's reactions to focus on what was happening on each page. But most important, Bobby needed someone to assist him in moving that giant bubble around. My original writing simply had them head to the hills in the park. No interactions with the townspeople at all (not at all like the book today.)
This part of the story always annoyed me; just running the huge bubblegum bubble to the hills was boring. So I did a fourth re-write -- and then it came to me. I would have Bobby go to several locations, each one stating that Bobby could no longer stay because his bubble was getting too big. (This was the most significant change I made from the original story, and it makes me so happy to see that the alternative idea worked so well.)
Image #6: Headin' fer them thar hills! |
Image #7: Now moving the bubble from place to place was crucial to help show the overall size of the bubble and how much it was growing. To help emphasize the massive scale, I would start to have them struggle with controlling and moving the bubble, especially uphill.
Image #7: The struggle of moving the world biggest bubblegum bubble uphill. |
Image #8: I knew how I wanted the story to end, but how to get there wasn't easy. In the original story, they make it to the top of the hill -- and then a gust of wind takes it away.
Image #8: A similar image is used in the book, except the boys don't lose the bubble -- yet! |
Image #9: This page was left out. It was always the weakest part of the book to me. But it was my only solution at the time. I can safely say that the story has gotten considerably better because of the rewrites. It's important to step back from your work, give it a rest and then approach I again with new eyes.
Image 9: Chasing after the floating giant bubblegum bubble heading towards the town |
Tomorrow I will try to cover and explain . . . (shudder) . . . The original ending. Go to Part Three
Monday, January 21, 2013
The Importance of the Re-Write!: Part 3
Part 3: The BIG problematic finale!
Image #11: I had to take a page or two to explain the dire situation. So I had Officer Augie explain to the boys about the danger approaching the town. I didn't realize it back then, but I was creating a situation in the story that could potentially scare children who were reading the book. I didn't want the story to focus so much on the meteor and the danger. I didn't want children thinking their town too could be hit with meteors.
I take back what I said before. This part is the most significant change to the story -- where my climatic ending just wasn't that exciting! (Lots of standing around.)
SPOILER ALERT: I'm about to give away the end, so here goes . . .
SPOILER ALERT: I'm about to give away the end, so here goes . . .
Image #10: We left off where the boys lost the giant bubble to the wind while on the park's highest hill.
I knew my ending already: the giant bubble deflects a meteor that was heading to the center of the town. I was stuck on how to get to that point. So I wrote the following:
I knew my ending already: the giant bubble deflects a meteor that was heading to the center of the town. I was stuck on how to get to that point. So I wrote the following:
1.) The bubble floats away with the wind. (Ok, that's how the bubble collides with the meteor.)
2.) The boys run after it, leading them to the center of town. (Ok, that gets them to the location)
3.) My story's BIG problem: how to suddenly mention that a meteor was heading toward the town.
I worked around this problem by having the town already know the meteor was coming and that officer Augie (later named Mike) was evacuating the area. I was not happy with this idea.
2.) The boys run after it, leading them to the center of town. (Ok, that gets them to the location)
3.) My story's BIG problem: how to suddenly mention that a meteor was heading toward the town.
I worked around this problem by having the town already know the meteor was coming and that officer Augie (later named Mike) was evacuating the area. I was not happy with this idea.
Image #10: Those who have read the book may notice this is now Mrs. Applebottom's location. Note the newspaper headline . . . |
Image #11: I had to take a page or two to explain the dire situation. So I had Officer Augie explain to the boys about the danger approaching the town. I didn't realize it back then, but I was creating a situation in the story that could potentially scare children who were reading the book. I didn't want the story to focus so much on the meteor and the danger. I didn't want children thinking their town too could be hit with meteors.
When doing the 3rd rewrite, the idea of losing the bubble to the wind and the evacuated town was utterly tossed aside.
Image #11: Officer Augie is taking WAY too much time telling the boys they are about to get hit by a meteor. |
Image #12: This is such a poor perspective and such a mediocre attempt at creating tension to the story. I started to notice what was missing -- and that was Bobby's biggest bubble. The main focus was nowhere to be seen. To follow just the characters without even seeing the bubble for many pages, was a poor decision.
When doing picture books, it's vital that the images alone can tell the story. If I took the words away from these several pages -- no one would know what was happening, including me.
When doing picture books, it's vital that the images alone can tell the story. If I took the words away from these several pages -- no one would know what was happening, including me.
Image #12: Oh No! Guess who wasted too much time hanging around a danger zone area? (And where did Officer Augie's newspaper go? Where'd that squirrel come from?) |
Image #13: This was just a silly filler page I added, but later I used this as a promotional idea.
I took the gum-wrapper artwork and made mock versions using packs of Trident and Dentyne gum. I would send a pack of gum wrapped with the Bobby gum-wrapper to publishers, along with a query letter and dummy book. (See my past blog about this by clicking HERE.)
To the people who have read the story, you can see the big changes that were made to Bobby Biggest Bubble. The re-writes helped me iron out the weaker areas and helped me revision the story in a far better way than I originally imagined.
Now the bubble appears on almost every page (in one form or another!) While it still has the meteor ending, it feels more humorous now than the original doom and gloom of the original. Bobby and Otter are visually the best of friends from the start. Overall, there a pattern and flow to the story.
Every story I do from now on will be re-written many times for this simple reason; every re-write tends to bring new and better ideas. Every re-write helps eliminate errors and weaknesses.I'm very proud of how the story turned out and heard many comments from parents who say their children enjoy the book ( -- and THAT is the importance of the re-write.)
Now the bubble appears on almost every page (in one form or another!) While it still has the meteor ending, it feels more humorous now than the original doom and gloom of the original. Bobby and Otter are visually the best of friends from the start. Overall, there a pattern and flow to the story.
Every story I do from now on will be re-written many times for this simple reason; every re-write tends to bring new and better ideas. Every re-write helps eliminate errors and weaknesses.I'm very proud of how the story turned out and heard many comments from parents who say their children enjoy the book ( -- and THAT is the importance of the re-write.)
Monday, January 14, 2013
Bobby's Ginormous Jelly: Beginning of the sequel
As of this writing, over 350 copies of Bobby's Biggest Bubble have been sent out to KickStarters, online purchasers, agents, publishers and libraries.
Getting published can take years so I'm prepared for the long haul.
But no writer (or illustrator) should just wait around for something to happen.
So, the sequel to Bobby's Biggest Bubble is now in the works. I already have the basic outline of the story written and I plan to complete the 1st draft and rewrite by the end of this month. The story with layout sketches should be completed by March. Then hopefully I can ink and color the book by June. If that all happens as scheduled, I plan to print 500 soft cover books** and have them ready to be sent out by mid August.
One thing about this book: it should be much easier than the first. The main reason is that the entire cast of characters will be back again -- and generally they will appear in the same background settings. There will be differences but the layout will be very close to the 1st book.
There is a special group of new characters that are very important to the story.The aliens. I have been playing around, trying to make the aliens that would work best for the story. It's taken awhile, but I think I'm close to what I need.
I needed the aliens to be funny, small and generally not scary but at the same time, these aliens mean business. (Note to parents: Revealing these little guys now is a bit of a spoiler to the 2nd story so any of you planning to get the 2nd book for your little ones - don't tell them aliens are in the 2nd book!)
These little guys may still change a bit. I'm still thinking about dressing them in outfits similar to Bruce Lee's yellow jumpsuit.
** Just to note: I won't be using KickStarter again for the sequel. Soft cover books will be much cheaper to make than hardcover books. Plus with a smaller order, we should easily afford the printing costs on our own.
Check back here for more updates as the book is developed.
Getting published can take years so I'm prepared for the long haul.
But no writer (or illustrator) should just wait around for something to happen.
So, the sequel to Bobby's Biggest Bubble is now in the works. I already have the basic outline of the story written and I plan to complete the 1st draft and rewrite by the end of this month. The story with layout sketches should be completed by March. Then hopefully I can ink and color the book by June. If that all happens as scheduled, I plan to print 500 soft cover books** and have them ready to be sent out by mid August.
One thing about this book: it should be much easier than the first. The main reason is that the entire cast of characters will be back again -- and generally they will appear in the same background settings. There will be differences but the layout will be very close to the 1st book.
There is a special group of new characters that are very important to the story.The aliens. I have been playing around, trying to make the aliens that would work best for the story. It's taken awhile, but I think I'm close to what I need.
These are the Moop-Meeps. They'll be giving Bobby an unexpected visit in Bobby's Ginormous Jelly. |
These little guys may still change a bit. I'm still thinking about dressing them in outfits similar to Bruce Lee's yellow jumpsuit.
** Just to note: I won't be using KickStarter again for the sequel. Soft cover books will be much cheaper to make than hardcover books. Plus with a smaller order, we should easily afford the printing costs on our own.
Check back here for more updates as the book is developed.
Friday, December 28, 2012
My Uncle Bob and Bobby's Biggest Bubble in the local news
The following was taken from the Suburban Newspaper, Dec. 28, 2012.
Jim Romer bases story on his uncle, Bob Dunzelman
BY CHUCK O’DONNELL Correspondent
OLD BRIDGE — It started off with a flicker of imagination and a sketch on a scrap of paper. Jim Romer took one look at this funny-looking kid he’d just drawn, named him Bobby after his beloved late uncle, and began to get swept up in a surge of inspiration. The result is “Bobby’s Biggest Bubble,” a new children’s picture book created and self-published by the Old Bridge cartoonist. The full-color, hardcover 24-page book is influenced by some of the tales Romer loved as a kid, from“Where the Wild Things Are” to “Harold and the Purple Crayon” to “The Phantom Tollbooth.”
In the book, Bobby gets a huge crate full of one million Super-Duper-Wubble-Bubble-Really-Gummy-Gumballs. Then chaos ensues. It’s just the kind of story Uncle Bob would have liked, Romer said. In fact, Romer dedicated the book to Bob Dunzelman, who died of leukemia, for showing him “it was possible to live with the fun-loving wonder, playful spirit, and imagination of your childhood throughout your entire life.”
“I did a little sketch of a stubby, little boy, which I instantly named Bobby to honor my uncle,” Romer said. “By doing that, one thing lead to another. I gave the character a cap similar to what my uncle wore. I gave the character my uncle’s creative imagination, especially on the pages where they are doing crazy things with the bubblegum. “And with the title of the book finally in place, the story seemed to come together so easily.”
But getting it published was another story. Romer set out about 20 years ago to make kids’ books, but couldn’t get his foot in the door. When his uncle relapsed after a bone marrow transplant, Romer called it “a dark time.” He took his rejection letters and sketches and put them away.
Eventually he turned to toy designing, and now works as an exclusive creative director for a China-based company that creates many sewn goods, like plush toys, costumes and pet toys.While many of Romer‘s designs can be seen in stores such as Target, Kmart, Petsmart and Walmart, his dream of making kids books never faded. When Romer discovered the growing trend of crowdfunding, using sites such as Kickstarter.com to appeal directly to potential buyers who make pledges in return for rewards such as copies of the finished book, he realized this was his chance.
Seventy-nine people, many of them complete strangers moved by Romer’s desire to honor his uncle with a fun kid’s tale, donated a total of more than $5,000 through Kickstarter.com so he could publish “Bobby‘s Biggest Bubble.”
He also got a lot of help from Cindy Santos, his cousin and Uncle Bob’s daughter. A kindergarten teacher, Santos not only helped proofread the book, but prompted Romer to rework parts of the story after she pointed out it would be read out loud, which “tends to need a rhythm and flow,” Romer said.
Plus, Santos’s triplets, Bobbi (who is named after Romer’s uncle), Jase and Andrew, and her students at her Upper Saddle River school, were the first test audiences. “I can tell when I read his book how well he knew my father,” Santos said. “I can see my father in this character over and over again: the way Bobby balances things on his head, his cap, his hand in his pocket on the first page, his tongue out when he’s shooting the marble, the crowbar in his hand, his face when he is trying to first blow up the bubble.”
Making the book and starting on the sequel, “Bobby’s Ginormous Jelly,” brought back a flood of memories and emotions for Romer: the vast Matchbox car collection Uncle Bob kept in his basement. The way he’d always be making something, like an octagon-shaped terrarium. The Christmas mornings he would be on the floor playing with the other children.
The best, Romer said, was the time he and his uncle went to the toy store and bought a Styrofoam rocket jet that launches using air capsules. What Romer didn’t know is that his uncle had bought about a dozen rubber parachute men at the counter. “So you can imagine my surprise when the rocket took off, which was already cool, but then these tiny parachute men started to fall off the rocket and floated safely down to the ground,” Romer said. “I still remember his laugh and joy on his face when that the idea worked.”
“I always knew how many people my dad loved and spent time with and gave attention to, I just never realized the mark he was leaving on all these people — Jim included,” Santos said. “For him to write an entire book with the main character named after my father with my father’s likeness is really an
honor. My father would be so proud.”
For more information about Romer and his children’s book, “Bobby’s Biggest Bubble,” visit http://arrrggghhh.com.
BY CHUCK O’DONNELL Correspondent
OLD BRIDGE — It started off with a flicker of imagination and a sketch on a scrap of paper. Jim Romer took one look at this funny-looking kid he’d just drawn, named him Bobby after his beloved late uncle, and began to get swept up in a surge of inspiration. The result is “Bobby’s Biggest Bubble,” a new children’s picture book created and self-published by the Old Bridge cartoonist. The full-color, hardcover 24-page book is influenced by some of the tales Romer loved as a kid, from“Where the Wild Things Are” to “Harold and the Purple Crayon” to “The Phantom Tollbooth.”
In the book, Bobby gets a huge crate full of one million Super-Duper-Wubble-Bubble-Really-Gummy-Gumballs. Then chaos ensues. It’s just the kind of story Uncle Bob would have liked, Romer said. In fact, Romer dedicated the book to Bob Dunzelman, who died of leukemia, for showing him “it was possible to live with the fun-loving wonder, playful spirit, and imagination of your childhood throughout your entire life.”
“I did a little sketch of a stubby, little boy, which I instantly named Bobby to honor my uncle,” Romer said. “By doing that, one thing lead to another. I gave the character a cap similar to what my uncle wore. I gave the character my uncle’s creative imagination, especially on the pages where they are doing crazy things with the bubblegum. “And with the title of the book finally in place, the story seemed to come together so easily.”
But getting it published was another story. Romer set out about 20 years ago to make kids’ books, but couldn’t get his foot in the door. When his uncle relapsed after a bone marrow transplant, Romer called it “a dark time.” He took his rejection letters and sketches and put them away.
Eventually he turned to toy designing, and now works as an exclusive creative director for a China-based company that creates many sewn goods, like plush toys, costumes and pet toys.While many of Romer‘s designs can be seen in stores such as Target, Kmart, Petsmart and Walmart, his dream of making kids books never faded. When Romer discovered the growing trend of crowdfunding, using sites such as Kickstarter.com to appeal directly to potential buyers who make pledges in return for rewards such as copies of the finished book, he realized this was his chance.
Seventy-nine people, many of them complete strangers moved by Romer’s desire to honor his uncle with a fun kid’s tale, donated a total of more than $5,000 through Kickstarter.com so he could publish “Bobby‘s Biggest Bubble.”
He also got a lot of help from Cindy Santos, his cousin and Uncle Bob’s daughter. A kindergarten teacher, Santos not only helped proofread the book, but prompted Romer to rework parts of the story after she pointed out it would be read out loud, which “tends to need a rhythm and flow,” Romer said.
Plus, Santos’s triplets, Bobbi (who is named after Romer’s uncle), Jase and Andrew, and her students at her Upper Saddle River school, were the first test audiences. “I can tell when I read his book how well he knew my father,” Santos said. “I can see my father in this character over and over again: the way Bobby balances things on his head, his cap, his hand in his pocket on the first page, his tongue out when he’s shooting the marble, the crowbar in his hand, his face when he is trying to first blow up the bubble.”
Making the book and starting on the sequel, “Bobby’s Ginormous Jelly,” brought back a flood of memories and emotions for Romer: the vast Matchbox car collection Uncle Bob kept in his basement. The way he’d always be making something, like an octagon-shaped terrarium. The Christmas mornings he would be on the floor playing with the other children.
The best, Romer said, was the time he and his uncle went to the toy store and bought a Styrofoam rocket jet that launches using air capsules. What Romer didn’t know is that his uncle had bought about a dozen rubber parachute men at the counter. “So you can imagine my surprise when the rocket took off, which was already cool, but then these tiny parachute men started to fall off the rocket and floated safely down to the ground,” Romer said. “I still remember his laugh and joy on his face when that the idea worked.”
“I always knew how many people my dad loved and spent time with and gave attention to, I just never realized the mark he was leaving on all these people — Jim included,” Santos said. “For him to write an entire book with the main character named after my father with my father’s likeness is really an
honor. My father would be so proud.”
For more information about Romer and his children’s book, “Bobby’s Biggest Bubble,” visit http://arrrggghhh.com.
Monday, November 26, 2012
Bobby's Biggest Bubble: Thank You image
This is an image I created over the Thanksgiving weekend to thank all of the KickStarter pledges and supporters that helped create Bobby's Biggest Bubble.
Thanks again to everyone who helped make this all possible. Yous guys is the best!!
UPDATE: I used this image for Illustration Friday the week of May 3 2013; the word of the week was TRIBUTE. This image has a double meaning to that word.
1st: It was part of my thank you to all the people that helped me create my first children's book, Bobby's Biggest Bubble.
2nd: The book itself was dedicated to my Uncle Bob, who inspired me with creative thinking, fun and just a ton of laughs. My Uncle passed away nearly 20 years ago from his bout with Leukemia -- but the memory of him and his influences on me live on . . .
From left to right: Oggy, Woger, Otter and Bobby |
UPDATE: I used this image for Illustration Friday the week of May 3 2013; the word of the week was TRIBUTE. This image has a double meaning to that word.
1st: It was part of my thank you to all the people that helped me create my first children's book, Bobby's Biggest Bubble.
2nd: The book itself was dedicated to my Uncle Bob, who inspired me with creative thinking, fun and just a ton of laughs. My Uncle passed away nearly 20 years ago from his bout with Leukemia -- but the memory of him and his influences on me live on . . .
Tuesday, November 6, 2012
UPDATE Bobby's Biggest Bubble: Bringing Back an Old Friend
This may sound weird, (and yes it's definitely is not completely sane, but remember I am a cartoonist) . . . but I'm getting nostalgic over a cartoon character as I start completing the ending to my book. The reason? This story allows me to use an old favorite character of mine, Professor Knozstuv.
Somewhere in the scrambling of thoughts, stories, toys and products I had the concept of creating a weekly educational comic strip. Today, comic strips in newspapers are becoming scarce, but still, I don't want to give away the idea for fear of someone else using the concept . . . but let's just say the comic strip starred a talking bear, a huge monster and all-knowing clumsy Prof. Knozstuv. (No, I don't know why those 3 characters.)
The pencil, ink and color transformation: fleshing out ol' Professor Knozstuv |
I don't know where my characters come from, I'm sure it's combination of memories, inspirations and brain storming. To be honest, I'm sure over 50% of the things I have sketched in the past were lost, destroyed or thrown away. But every once in awhile, a character appears on the paper - and there's recognition. I can imagine and "see" the voice, movement and personality of the character. Those are the ones I squirrel away; and the Professor is one of those characters.
He's a little bit Chaplin, pinch of Jerry Lewis' Nutty Professor and even a smidgen of Gabe Caplin's Mr. Kotter. It's probably been over 15 years since I last drew an image of him . . . yet there he is now, in my story playing a key part to the ending.
It feels real good to see the ol' Professor back on the paper again.
Welcome Back, Professor . . .
He's a little bit Chaplin, pinch of Jerry Lewis' Nutty Professor and even a smidgen of Gabe Caplin's Mr. Kotter. It's probably been over 15 years since I last drew an image of him . . . yet there he is now, in my story playing a key part to the ending.
It feels real good to see the ol' Professor back on the paper again.
Welcome Back, Professor . . .
- - - - - UPDATE - - - - -
I found the very first sketch of the Prof today. This file says it is from Nov 23, 1997 -- but I believe it is much older than that based on the style of my drawing.
I found the very first sketch of the Prof today. This file says it is from Nov 23, 1997 -- but I believe it is much older than that based on the style of my drawing.
To see this now is strange, seeing the first impression of a character that I have created a few decades ago. But as time goes on, you tend to improve your characters by eliminating their weaker aspects and emphasizing the better.
(Sidenote: Just look at the first few original comic strips of the Peanuts and Garfield, you won't believe what those characters looked like when they were first created.)
(Sidenote: Just look at the first few original comic strips of the Peanuts and Garfield, you won't believe what those characters looked like when they were first created.)
- - - - - END OF UPDATE - - - - -
Monday, October 8, 2012
Bobby's Biggest Bubble: Now available online
Bobby's Biggest Bubble in now available online for purchase at Etsy and eBay!
There will be more marketing locations added in the coming months, but for now I need to control the amount of books being sold until I receive the bulk of my shipment in a few weeks.
Update:
eBay, Etsy, and other online book outlets are no longer linked to the book.
This is mostly due to cost and maintaining inventory.
You can still purchase the book via Paypal (at the lowest price with free shipping.) and with Amazon (which costs more because Amazon wants a larger cut of the sale.)
There will be more marketing locations added in the coming months, but for now I need to control the amount of books being sold until I receive the bulk of my shipment in a few weeks.
Update:
eBay, Etsy, and other online book outlets are no longer linked to the book.
This is mostly due to cost and maintaining inventory.
You can still purchase the book via Paypal (at the lowest price with free shipping.) and with Amazon (which costs more because Amazon wants a larger cut of the sale.)
Tuesday, October 2, 2012
Bobby's Biggest Bubble: 1st Shipment of the Books have Arrived!
Books are in, and they look great!
Mailing out to KickStarters begins Thursday Oct, 4th.
Mailing out to KickStarters begins Thursday Oct, 4th.
New orders for the book will available in a few weeks in the middle of October; I'll be sure to provide links to where the book will be sold.
First shipment arrives and looks fantastic |
Closer look at the bookmarkers |
Showing the white bubble wrapped packet and it's contents going out to KickStarters |
WOOT!
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